We have managed to cut down a lot of our filming clips to get it down to 2 minutes instead of being a minutes over...so we have no got rid of the car scenes as we just didn't think it was that important or necessary. and we have also just shortened some of the clips altogether
We have also showed our opening of what we have done so far to some of our friends, so we have got some very useful audience feedback such as...
1.Make the flashback more clear that it is actually a flashback, so we are thinking of make the shot effect different to black and white
2. Getting hannah to speak louder and more clear when she is on the phone, as she had her back turned therefore it was difficult for the audience to know what was being said
3. Make the phone call hannah has more significant
4. Get the scripting right so the conversation is structured better to make it quicker and flow better.
What the audience liked...
They said the storyline was very mysterious and it fits well with the conventions of a thriller
The music that hannah had made on garageband creates suspense in the atmosphere
Some of the audience liked the black and white effect as it turned into a flashback
they thought the shot of the roundabout created a sinister and scary effect to the opening
Throguhout our editing we are hoping to get some more audience feedback :) x
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